Four Short Walls #46 - Anniversary

Watership Down - Under the Microscope

Watership Down

This is one of the cherished books from my childhood, and I recently had the pleasure of reading it to my daughter. She's seven, and she loved the story. And, what's more, I'm much older than seven, and I still loved it. Beautiful, heartfelt, adventurous, and full of stories within stories. Sort of Brer Rabbit meets Lord of the Rings meets 1984. This is book is still magical, though a few of the descriptions of the countryside are, shall we say, long. But when the rabbit Bigwig faces General Woundwort in one of the tunnels atop Watership Down, well, I still had shivers running up my spine. And it's a wonderful character novel, too, even if the characters have fur and whiskers.

Time and Geologic Pressure

Does anyone else feel the weight of time? I've been feeling it lately, on account of being so busy. Many overtime hours, three kids, a wife on bedrest expecting our fourth... trying to fit in time for blogging and writing has been a challenge (though, of course, if that's my biggest worry, things are pretty good). Time is a precious commodity; sometimes, when you have a lot of if, you forget just how precious. Remembered hours: some spent well, some spent... not so well.

I have lots of ideas and ambitions for this year, but finding the time may not be possible. Trying to be a better blogger, a better writer, a better father. There are things I would like to do. All I can hope is that the pressure of time has its own value, an intense pinpoint force that can focus effort. Because sometimes you can do what you have to do only because you have to do it -- walls can breed an intense desire to climb.

Time as pressure, as an incredible weight -- but there can be something purifying about embracing this. The weight of your life creates this pressure, a geologic force created from the weight of used time, compressing things downward, downward. Sometimes the imagination crystallizes and things come clear and the vast pressure distills something clear and perfect and sharp out of the coal dust swirling off the time of your days, making something beautiful within the smallest window of space and time.

Emotional Structure

Guest Post: Emotional Structure In Your Novel
by Susan Kaye Quinn


I'm a huge fan of novel structure. I believe that using structure doesn't make your story formulaic, it strengthens its core so that your story can carry an awesome premise to its fullest expression. Structure is the steel beam that you never see in your house, without which it would cave in on your head. Necessary. Invisible. Allows things like skyscrapers (bestsellers) to exist.





I keep a beat sheet at the ready, revising it often as I write, and track my adherence to the form using a beat sheet excel spreadsheet. But it wasn't until I read Peter Dunne's book Emotional Structure that I realized the character arc of a story has a similar underlying structure that holds up the story and makes it shine.





Some people know what their story is before they start writing. I'm not one of those people - in spite of being a hyper-plotter and structure-lover, the emotional evolution of my characters is something I know intuitively, but have a hard time expressing in words until I'm a draft or two into the novel. So I often revise to get the plot to follow the emotional arc, as I come to understand it. In my just-completed novel Closed Hearts, I understood the emotional arc of my character fairly well before the first draft - partly because it was heavily outlined and partly because it was the second book in a trilogy: I knew a LOT about where my MC had come from and where she was going. Yet, I still found myself going over her emotional arc again, even in the final draft, revising and rewriting to sharpen and strengthen her emotional journey.


But how do you do that exactly?


Dunne lays it out (in a somewhat meandering fashion) in his book Emotional Structure, and I encourage you to read it. But here's my Emotional Beat Sheet to get you started (note that when I say "dangerous" and "survival" this can be in the literal physical sense but also the emotional/spiritual sense):

Emotional Beat Sheet

THE OLD WORLD - Hero has survived by using practical ways to avoid pain (aka the Set Up in Blake Snyder’s Beat Sheet)


This is our hero’s emotional starting state. He gets by in his day-to-day life, pretending to be someone else, covering old wounds, using skills carefully honed to deal with the troubles in his life. It’s working (sort of) and given his druthers, our hero would stay in this state. Of course, that can’t happen (or there would be no story). Sometimes there will be a “sigh moment” that signals how pitiful and unfulfilling this life is, so the reader knows: this cannot remain as is, because it is a death-of-the-soul. But the hero is determined to stay here, because it works for them.


PLOT HAPPENS: Something occurs that so that her defenses don’t work very well and she’s forced on a new path in order to survive long enough to get back to normal (aka the Inciting Incident)

The hero’s world is upset in some dramatic way so that her old way of operating in the world doesn’t help - in fact, using those old coping techniques may actually get her killed (or lose her job, or lose her boyfriend). Our hero scrambles to react to the new circumstances - just temporarily - because she's just sure if she fixes this one little problem, everything will go back to “normal” again.


IT GETS WORSE: Something happens that pushes her completely out of her old world (may be the shift into Act II, where our hero enters a “new world” of the story)

Now our hero's normal tools for survival aren’t working at all. Her emotional walls start to crack and her weaknesses are exposed (maybe weaknesses she wasn’t even aware of). She starts to question those old ways of dealing with the world, because they’re not working at all in this new world. The new world is strange and dangerous (to her emotionally) and she realizes that getting back to “normal” is going to be a lot tougher than she thought. She’s moved fully into this “new world” that requires new skills to cope.


LEAP OF FAITH: Things get so bad that her old habits become useless. She must be brave, take a leap of faith into the unknown (maybe the All is Lost or Dark Night of the Soul beat or possibly the Midpoint; this leap of faith is the emotional pivot point of the story)

Our hero has run out of old ways of dealing with the world. He’s tried and failed. He's beaten down by the plot (which doesn’t exist to beat our hero, but to force him to change). He finally is forced to take that leap of faith. To change. Because in his moment of vulnerability, he finds that he can learn, he can change, he can reach down into the depths and find that thing (that piece of the divine) that will allow him to move forward and triumph. In reaching deep inside, he will learn the secret history of his past - the thing that caused him to build up those defensive habits in the first place. He has to face those demons to move past them. The plot serves to force this to happen, to connect this moment to his physical survival.



THE NEW YOU: After the MC takes the leap of faith, he has to use these new emotional tools to solve his problems. He may be clumsy and frustrated at first, but he has to use them in order to survive (maybe break into Act III).

Our hero isn’t going to be super awesome with these new emotional tools right out of the gate. He may have figured out that he has to change, but may not know exactly how to make that work. He will try, again and again, through action and decisions, until we get to the climax of the story, where his use of these new tools will ultimately be critical to his survival.


If you line up this progression with your story, you may find spots where your emotional arc could use some propping up. This emotional progression may (or may not) line up with the Beat Sheet PLOT POINTS that I've mentioned above. The plot and emotional arc are interwoven, but the emotional arc is primary - the plot exists to force the character through their emotional journey.
My favorite quote from Dunne (paraphrased): The life-threatening plot doesn't exist to kill your character, but to reveal her.
In other words, the gun isn't there to kill your character, just to motivate them to change.

 (Aren't we authors mean?)

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Susan Kaye Quinn is the author of the bestselling YA novel Open Minds, Book One of the Mindjack Trilogy, which is available on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and iTunes. The sequel Closed Hearts has just been released. Susan's business card says "Author and Rocket Scientist," but she mostly plays on Twitter, Facebook, and Pinterest.

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Four Short Walls #45 - Dress Code

Whisper to the Stones

I would like to go back here, to the Alhambra Palace. Why? Because it's beautiful. And because it's peaceful. And because just looking at it is calming and half-hypnotizes me toward sleep. And I want to sleep. I've worked almost seventy hours in the last four days and the world is a little swimmy and I just want to lie down in this picture and sleep. And if someone brought me some lemonade, well, that would be okay too.

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