Wow! So much told in such few words. And so sentimental. Who said men like this didn't exist in this world? :o) I just 'met' Maine Character, too. He emailed me after seeing my book trailer. Nice guy!
Donna – ghosts would be cool. And I can definitely see how you thought siblings, with “twin” and “sister-spirit,” but she’s simply describing how, at just the right time, she found someone who validated how she is. A teammate of hers who’s also looked at boys and wondered what they could ever have to offer her.
That's so beautiful! I love "rafters cracked with stars"and "sinking through the midnight breeze". Matthew's right - evocative is the right word. Very other-worldly.
Great work, MC, and I'm with Matthew again - when are you going to start a blog?
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Nice. Evocative. Mysterious.
Lines like 'our touches bound only in candlelight' and 'rafters cracked with stars' are great, because they say so much with so few words.
I happen to know this guy, this Maine Character, and he's great.
Wow! So much told in such few words. And so sentimental. Who said men like this didn't exist in this world? :o) I just 'met' Maine Character, too. He emailed me after seeing my book trailer. Nice guy!
'so few words', rather :-/
Lovely and evocative, just as Matthew says. Nicely done! :)
Thanks, everyone! This is the first time I’ve been bold enough to share my writing, and so you know it means a lot.
Bryan’s a great editor, which put me in good hands, and thanks to him and Matt for encouraging me to do this.
Love your writing, Maine character, it touches the soul.
Oooh! Cool!
Mysterious is right. Couldn't decide if they are lovers, siblings, or ghosts. I liked it.
.......dhole
Bravo. Matthew is right it is very mysterious.
Wonderful! You seemed to stuff a lifetime into so few words! Evocative writing, brought back some nice memories! :)
Thanks again, everyone. Much appreciated.
Donna – ghosts would be cool. And I can definitely see how you thought siblings, with “twin” and “sister-spirit,” but she’s simply describing how, at just the right time, she found someone who validated how she is. A teammate of hers who’s also looked at boys and wondered what they could ever have to offer her.
Now: when the hell are you going to start a blog?
That's so beautiful! I love "rafters cracked with stars"and "sinking through the midnight breeze". Matthew's right - evocative is the right word. Very other-worldly.
Great work, MC, and I'm with Matthew again - when are you going to start a blog?
Just a couple of months ago, I gave this relationship doctor Robinson buckler a try. It was my last hope to get my ex husband back.
Weeks before my ex left me and our 2 children, there were a lot of argument and fighting between me and him. On the day he left me, he told me that he doesn't think he loved me any more and this was not working. I was so devastated hearing this, I begged him not to go and I even promised that I would change. But he made up his mind already. He packed his bags and left our house.
I tried calling him and texting him to tell him I miss him and still love him. I asked him to give us another chance. He slowly stopped replying to my messages and stopped picking up my calls.
I then searched the internet on how to get ex back, and even bought a few products such as text your ex back and ex recovery system. Nothing worked, and my ex was still very cold towards me.
When I was about to give up, I found Robinson buckler ex back program. He is a relationship coach with a lot of success stories. I knew what I needed was not a book but a coach to guide me how to make my ex fall in love with me again. I immediately signed up for his program.
In the first couple of days, I made a lot of good progress. I am happier and more confident. My ex saw the positive changes in me, and started to talk to me more and even asked me out for dates.
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