tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post4277589581352448289..comments2024-03-18T06:27:34.815-04:00Comments on The Alchemy of Writing: The Falcon - The World in MiniatureBryan Russellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09555071335245492790noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-58740698548203046382023-08-25T20:54:00.652-04:002023-08-25T20:54:00.652-04:00Just a couple of months ago, I gave this relations...Just a couple of months ago, I gave this relationship doctor Robinson buckler a try. It was my last hope to get my ex husband back.<br /><br />Weeks before my ex left me and our 2 children, there were a lot of argument and fighting between me and him. On the day he left me, he told me that he doesn't think he loved me any more and this was not working. I was so devastated hearing this, I begged him not to go and I even promised that I would change. But he made up his mind already. He packed his bags and left our house.<br /><br />I tried calling him and texting him to tell him I miss him and still love him. I asked him to give us another chance. He slowly stopped replying to my messages and stopped picking up my calls.<br /><br />I then searched the internet on how to get ex back, and even bought a few products such as text your ex back and ex recovery system. Nothing worked, and my ex was still very cold towards me.<br /><br />When I was about to give up, I found Robinson buckler ex back program. He is a relationship coach with a lot of success stories. I knew what I needed was not a book but a coach to guide me how to make my ex fall in love with me again. I immediately signed up for his program.<br /><br />In the first couple of days, I made a lot of good progress. I am happier and more confident. My ex saw the positive changes in me, and started to talk to me more and even asked me out for dates.<br /><br />Fast forward two weeks later, my ex told me that he wants to give our relationship a second try. I was beyond happy when I heard that.<br /><br />Now, we are closer and happier together. It would not have happened without Robinson buckler help.<br /><br />I highly recommend______________R.buckler11@[[gmail.com]]<br /><br />if you are serious about getting back your ex.<br /><br />Win Ex lover back in 48 hours......<br /><br />He cures herpes with herbal mixture<br /><br />100% result guaranteed..<br /><br />-GENITAL AND ORAL HERPES<br /><br />-HPV<br /><br />-ERECTILE DYSFUNCTION<br /><br />–HEPATITIS A,B AND C<br /><br />-COLD SORE<br /><br />-SHINGLES<br /><br />-FIBROID<br /><br />-BARENESS/INFERTILITY…Shannon Macklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07823939088866689045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-24941364615923312602011-02-21T04:47:13.442-05:002011-02-21T04:47:13.442-05:00Excellent Marlene. I know you are putting a lot of...Excellent Marlene. I know you are putting a lot of hard work and thought into this, the result speaks for itself. I love the different levels of power you depict in this short piece. I can hardly wait to read the rest of it.Jurie Humannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-25242332246152202542011-02-11T21:32:57.585-05:002011-02-11T21:32:57.585-05:00I really loved this. Beautiful imagery, and the na...I really loved this. Beautiful imagery, and the narrative flow is fine-tuned. Thanks so much for sharing! I would definitely like to read more when there is more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-50432734415493838212011-02-11T03:31:41.574-05:002011-02-11T03:31:41.574-05:00Thank you again for the comments. It certainly hel...Thank you again for the comments. It certainly helps to know that one is on the right track especially since writing (as we all know) is very much a solitary journey often undertaken in the dead of night :)Marlene Nash-McKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01104506430656992958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-70680363200958040742011-02-11T02:55:16.300-05:002011-02-11T02:55:16.300-05:00M.A Leslie summarized it perfectly!
I feel as if...M.A Leslie summarized it perfectly! <br /><br />I feel as if I haven't been reading, but rather seeing the events happen right in front of me.<br /><br />Congratulations!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-7623778142345920702011-02-10T15:28:29.958-05:002011-02-10T15:28:29.958-05:00I have to agree, this excellent. I feel like I ju...I have to agree, this excellent. I feel like I just sat through a well done movie trailer and if I don't go see the movie in theaters, then I will be the only one in the world who doesn't.<br /><br />When there is more, I can't wait to read it.<br />M.M.A. Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00345656231366226417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-91626294681233412082011-02-10T14:41:12.383-05:002011-02-10T14:41:12.383-05:00I'm with Susan - very strong imagery throughou...I'm with Susan - very strong imagery throughout the piece. A solid story. Nice work, Marlene. Thank you for sharing.Paul Josephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07219724579550337686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-83590592878114825802011-02-10T13:26:11.527-05:002011-02-10T13:26:11.527-05:00Enjoyed this fiction, Marlene, and would read more...Enjoyed this fiction, Marlene, and would read more of the same. I get enticed by legends and the battle between good & evil. The flow between the changes from bird to human draws me in -- very well done. <br /><br />I just hope that Dante wasn't right (7 different hells - when one would do)! Who wants zombies & other gnarly folk being released from the nether regions.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this with us, Bryan.D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-49477118879505775382011-02-10T10:56:33.363-05:002011-02-10T10:56:33.363-05:00Thank you so much for the gracious comments.
Matt...Thank you so much for the gracious comments. <br />Matthew: it is indeed part of something bigger :)<br />Susan: very much like life - powerful forces deciding the faith of the 'little guy' and often each other as wellMarlene Nash-McKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01104506430656992958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-70653990923621640952011-02-10T08:49:15.937-05:002011-02-10T08:49:15.937-05:00I love the imagery here, with the birds of prey an...I love the imagery here, with the birds of prey and the mouse and the power in crashing waves. Thanks for sharing! :)Susan Kaye Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07348197999397141067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5423907132654588993.post-25219551648851423172011-02-10T07:33:50.764-05:002011-02-10T07:33:50.764-05:00I get the feeling this is a part of something bigg...I get the feeling this is a part of something bigger, which is fine, because it's awesome, and left me wanting more.<br /><br />I also cannot get over how much I like the line "rapidly approaching raptor" even though it's simple.<br /><br />Well done Marlene!Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.com